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lookluc@lemmy.world to I Made This (MOVED TO LEMMY.ZIP)@lemm.ee ·
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Made my first short film

www.youtube.com

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Made my first short film

www.youtube.com

lookluc@lemmy.world to I Made This (MOVED TO LEMMY.ZIP)@lemm.ee ·
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  • audin@lemm.eedeleted by creator
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    what the hell is going on with that title

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      Almost a thesis

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    I’d skip the text overlays as they “meme-ify” the film. Also, I replaced the audio with REM’s Everybody Hurts and it fit the vibe quite nicely.

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      I don’t understand “meme-ify” but ok. I tried listening with that song and damn, you’re right, it does!

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        I mean that the typeface you used is commonly used in memes. It just seems like it would have looked nicer with the title in a single title card screen rather than have pieces of it flashing and jumping around in the first few clips. It seems hyper, erratic, funny (again, in a meme way), and at odds with the vibe of the rest of the film.

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          Thank you for de feedback!

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    Comments are disabled?

    • lookluc@lemmy.worldOP
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      Yes

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    @lookluc cool, I just crossposted it to kbin movies!

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      Thank you so much!

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    Who is the narrator?

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      I might be halucinating but it sounds like a new zealander.

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        I missed this because I wasn’t looking. Maxwell Gisborne.

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          Correct!

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